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Reviewer: RachelX Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/05/18 07:38 pm Title: Time to play

I am quite upset after reading this story...because there is obviously more story to tell, it is far from being over, but I fear it has been orphaned by the author. Say it a'int so!

Reviewer: ElizahAT Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/05/16 04:49 am Title: We Meet Two Handsome Boys

Owh.... I dont think anybody can do that in real life, kiss a girl just like that in the first encounter. But is is your story so I can live with that. Overall I like your story setting. Please continue.

Reviewer: ElizahAT Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/05/16 04:38 am Title: Swimming in the pool

I love it how he is willing to dress up just for her sister happiness. :)

Reviewer: ElizahAT Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/05/16 04:24 am Title: We continue dressing up

The photo does help the imagination. :)

Reviewer: ElizahAT Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/05/16 03:48 am Title: Time to play

Nice. I like your starting.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/07/15 11:10 am Title: We Meet Two Handsome Boys

Still very cute!

Reviewer: LoveFox Signed Report
Date: 01/22/15 12:42 pm Title: Swimming in the pool

Continue.

Reviewer: DJPikachu Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 12/31/14 06:16 pm Title: Time to play

The pictures help visualize, although at the same confuse me as to what their ages are.

Reviewer: rigger24 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/13/14 03:21 pm Title: Time to play

Great so far! Keep it up!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 09/13/14 12:44 am Title: Swimming in the pool

Very cute!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/12/14 02:22 am Title: We continue dressing up

Very cute and sweet!

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/11/14 01:36 pm Title: Time to play

funny first chapter

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 09/11/14 01:28 pm Title: Time to play

Cute start

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