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Reviewer: Tahiri Veila Signed starstar Report
Date: 10/24/15 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

well written but seems incomplete

Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, maybe it was not a good idea leaving some things unknown. I'll try to do better for my next story, writing in detail a little more about everything, characters, situations, ending and so on. :)

Reviewer: Saklad Signed Report
Date: 06/09/15 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

No problem. It was very well done overall, and I didn't want to take off a star for something minor like that on someone's first story of all things.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. :)

Reviewer: Saklad Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/07/15 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 3

Great story, but you should probably cut down on "Oh my.".

Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, I guess you're right, I'll try to do something about it. Thanks again and many thanks for the five star rating! :)

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 02/09/15 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

Surprise! Surprise!

Author's Response: Hope you like how the story is going on. :)

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/01/15 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks and many thanks for the five star rating. :)

Reviewer: Smile Signed Report
Date: 09/23/14 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story, i love the spooky atmosphere. Hoping to read more of this story soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Sorry to keep you waiting, I've been very busy lately, but I'm trying to work on the second chapter as much as possible. Thanks for your patience, and I hope you'll still be looking forward to it. :)

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 08/31/14 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Very well done!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: A_Kent Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/31/14 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Good start.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: Gracie216 Signed Report
Date: 08/30/14 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

good story

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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