Date: 02/15/17 04:21 pm Title: Showtime
I just found this story and, as a fan of SAO, I love it. It's a great fanfic. I read in the comments that you had planned up to a ch 7. I know that it is probably dead after all this time, but I truly hope it continues one day.
Date: 08/29/14 12:36 pm Title: The World Seed
You have an amazing start and even though (as I have told you) I haven't seen the show, I'm entranced already. It reads like an anime, which interest me. Especially since most stories I read, read like real life. Great great start! :)
Author's Response: Awesome! I'm glad this plays t your tastes even though you haven't seen the anime. I just wanted to capture the world around SAO and for that, I need to use an anime setting. Now... I can tell you that PUN-Kun Warriors Online and the rumours surrounding it, were created for one specific reason... Revenge. I will also be looking forward to Chapter 7 of 'Story of a Gir- I mean boy'! Until then... Cya in the next chapter... LasbAuthorArtist.
Date: 08/28/14 07:14 pm Title: The World Seed
An excellent beginning, I'm currently watching the latest season of SAO myself and you seem to have captured the feel of it. i do hope you continue :)
Author's Response: Wicked! I love that this is already engaging an audience and I'm surprised that I'm already getting a response to my first chapter! I grateful to that. I'm an all time fan of SAO and I can tell you that the prologue for this story took me longer than I could imagine. I really glad though that this story fits into the TG genre without trouble and I think this will be a very popular fiction to write and to read. Bear with me... The TG content will be held back for a more meaningful transformation, although when it does happen it will be a huge obstacle that Kirito has to face. Not sure if Asuna is into lesbians, but she does love Kirito more than anything... she'll at least help him with the changes. Before I go, this is a TG based on realistic motives will be similar to the GGO mystery in Volume 5&6 of the light novels. No more from me... The chapters will come out whenever I feel like writing and they will probably be a little longer next time. Until then... Cya in the next chapter... LasbAuthorArtist.
Date: 08/28/14 06:59 pm Title: The World Seed
Looks great thus far! Can't wait to see what you do next! Hope it's an in-depth/gradual change!
Author's Response: Haha... Thanks for the response! This story will no doubt be updated soon and I plan to make it engaging to a wide audience while impressing the fans throughout. I remind you, this is my first TG story and if I am doing anything story related wrong, please inform me. Until then... Cya in the next chapter... LasbAuthorArtist!