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Reviewer: kandijayne Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/14 10:42 pm Title: Greetings, and welcome to The Underworld

Bright and breezy, and well thought out - yes, of course The Underworld would be CRAP, wouldn't it? I like the idea that 'Satan' is a role, a job description rather than a specific person, and that there have been several. This was enjoyable. But you can't leave it there! You've just got Henrietta - Henri - installed in her/his new position; now we want to see what she does with it, or what The Underworld does with her!

Author's Response: Ah, CRAP is not the whole of The Underworld. Just the entrance. And I'm afraid that I can't claim full credit for the Satan-as-a-role idea. I got the idea from Piers Anthony's Incarnations of Immortality series, as well as the tv show Dead Like Me.

But I'm glad that you liked it, and I'm currently building the plot of the next chapter, so it should be out sometime next week, internet is intermittent right now so I might have it done earlier, but be unable to upload it.

Reviewer: EpicSophie Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/14 07:10 am Title: Greetings, and welcome to The Underworld

Loved it! The way it was presented left a smile on my face. Everything about this says "don't take me seriously."

I look forward to the next part!

Author's Response: Awesome! Thanks so much :) I'll be sure to be working on the next part soon.

Reviewer: Aura Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/14 01:09 am Title: Greetings, and welcome to The Underworld

This is probably one of the only stories on this site that actually made me laugh out loud. Just the way it was presented was perfect, especially with the disclaimer in the chapter note. Just adds to the feel. It really deserves a 5 star rating, and I've only read the first chapter! Also, please don't forget about this site in a week and leave this story to die... err... again? Hmm, can a story about the underworld "die?" Anyways, overall, good job so far, and I'm looking forward to you continuing.


Author's Response: Awesome! It's really great to hear that someone likes what you've written. I'll probably finish this little episode, then be done for a while (unless my other, more serious, project makes me want to screw with Henri some more). But I'll add to it as I generate ideas. Just knowing that someone out there wants to see more of it is a great motivator, so you should see Henri's entry into The Underworld finish up shortly. Yes, 'The' is capitalized. I said it should be :)

Reviewer: A_Kent Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/18/14 09:38 pm Title: Greetings, and welcome to The Underworld

You put a smile on my face, thanks for posting this.

Author's Response: Smiles are the purpose. I'm glad you liked it. I hope I come up with the next chapter soon :)

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