Reviews For Lisas storie
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Reviewer: Person42 Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 09/03/14 12:27 am Title: Becoming female

You know, you've never given a name to anyone. Not to mention the spelling errors and grammar at one or two places, but not a bad plot. Seems a bit rushed, though. It has potential. You just have to use it.

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