Date: 05/13/17 07:31 pm Title: Part 4
It is a reasonably sweet story, if a little outlandish in it's simplicity, sometimes.
Unfortunately there is one seriously spoiling error in your spelling: the word is waist, if you are talking about human anatomy as in the misdsection. There is also waste in a human body, but that is more generally called "shit", and a waste pipe is part of the plumbing of a toilet.
All in all the story is a bit too naive for me, but that is a matter of taste. The writing itself is acceptable, but nor brilliant, sorry.