Date: 07/13/14 10:58 pm Title: Yes
I really enjoyed the story, but I think that you need a transition between the penultimate paragraph and the last paragraph of the most recent chapter. Suddenly we read "Positive." I wasn't sure whether she was having a dream. By all means, do add some transitional material. For example, did she go to a pharmacy and buy a urine kit? What were her thoughts? How did she feel when she sat down on the toilet and peed on it? I am looking forward to the continuation of the story.