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Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/09/14 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1: Worried

I love it but I saw one little error, shouldn't this line refer to Melissa?
“When I was three years old...” I started crying. Lavender went over to me and gave me a hug.
^^^^^^^^^^ :) Love the additional background

Author's Response: thanks for that error. I will fix it now

Reviewer: Kazumy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/09/14 02:09 am Title: Chapter 1: Worried

-Hugs lavender softly-
In the comics you can feel what's happening yet it feels and the expresions and feelings are ten fold while reading this.. i cried but also cheered when melissa accepted her for what she is...
True friends are like finding the needle in a haystack.. very rare and precious

Author's Response: so true Kazumy, so true

Reviewer: diaperdd Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/08/14 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: Worried

lol i admit i had a few tears in my eyes when she was crying trying to hell Melissa her secret. and i did recognize the "is grass pink" great start for your new story. looking forward to seeing how this turns out.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. It made me cry writing it.

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