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Reviewer: RobynAitch Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/26/16 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 43

One of my favourite stories on here, and still enjoyable re-reading it. The smut's good and varied and touches on a lot of themes I enjoy, but beyond the smut it does a great job capturing the existential confusion of being a gender non-conforming kid entering puberty. I was sad to reach the end of it with so much in the air, but it felt like a good place to end it. I'd still love to read a sequel, though ;)

Reviewer: Andi Bliss 1057 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/30/15 02:26 am Title: Chapter 17

I LOve this story. It's the best I've ever read. I feel like I'm a part of it. I want to be That Girl.
I feel like I really Am that Girl!
I like it! I LOve being her..
Thank you!

Reviewer: Robi Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/29/15 03:02 am Title: Chapter 4

This is the first story I have read from a female to male point of view.
One of my real life friends is a FtoM, had his tits cut off and taking male hormones. Even growing a beard if he wanted. We talked alot but not about sexual stuff. just general stuff once when he was having second thoughts of wanting to be a boy. Like we have our purges at least once in our life's and try to be the sex we where born with. Why can't FtoM do the same thing.
Anyway, this story shows the sexual side from a FtoM point of view and its got me thinking more but why think to much. Things are what they are and so be it.
Good story.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/31/14 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 43

Wow. Surprise ending. I was expecting at least one or two more chapters, getting home to her friends. Going out with Jane and Julie. Little Stevie, his family and Julie's parents... Oh well, great story anyway.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/31/14 10:27 am Title: Chapter 42

What a predicament...

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/31/14 09:11 am Title: Chapter 41

That was a rollercoaster. Loving it all the way

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/30/14 11:09 am Title: Chapter 40

Ann is just drawing them all in, gotta love her.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/30/14 09:54 am Title: Chapter 39

She is addicted. Where was that SA meeting?

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/30/14 08:32 am Title: Chapter 38

Excellent job, I love every word.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/30/14 07:37 am Title: Chapter 37

Oh wow, that was a twist. Are Stacy and Monica laughing their asses off at Annie's expense?

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/26/14 03:59 am Title: Chapter 36

Ahh, All the way to heaven, those legs reach from earth to the gate of paradise.

Author's Response: just wait for the next chapters. Oh wait you can read them now.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/26/14 12:46 am Title: Chapter 35

There aren't enough words to express how much I like this story. Excellent writing as always.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/25/14 09:42 am Title: Chapter 34

Wow, hot, wet, steamy and a little perverse. Love the twist with Julie's parents too!

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/25/14 04:23 am Title: Chapter 33

Love it. More please :)

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/23/14 07:41 am Title: Chapter 32

Hmm... I must be psychic or something (hopefully not psychotic) . Excellent work as always

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/17/14 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 31

Another interesting twist, now let's see Donna and Carol with Ann and Steve with his dad... OK I'm twisted :) Incest is best by government test

Author's Response: lol

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/17/14 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 30

Very fun chapter

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/17/14 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 29

Another great chapter

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/17/14 10:37 am Title: Chapter 28

Oh my, that was a complex turn. Left-up, right into a new dilemma. Gotta love it.

Author's Response: Gotta please the readers

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/13/14 08:23 am Title: Chapter 27

Ha, I don't think think you're gonna go away... I hope not, you still got a lot more good stuff to write

Author's Response: lol

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/13/14 07:15 am Title: Chapter 26

I love it again. Ann has all her confused thoughts...

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/13/14 04:18 am Title: Chapter 25

Oh wait the beep, too fast, oh damn there goes the bell too... How many right breasts did miss Haven have? How was it again one of her right breast??? Love the story so far.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/11/14 03:25 am Title: Chapter 24

Loving every word...Beep... Oh damn started to soon :) Yeah I'm funny, just wish more good people like you two would try and get to know me. I have so few friends left alive now.

Author's Response: lol you are funny. We could be your friends.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/10/14 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 23

Ooh, veeeerrrrry niiiice!

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/10/14 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

I guess I have to do it as three fives ;)

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/10/14 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1

LOL, I'll take that dare, and truth too - I plan on reading every chapter :)

Author's Response: lol I got a funny reader.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/09/14 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 22

All too good is all I can say. Loved every little nuance.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/09/14 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 21

Oh I dare Rache. Another excellent chapter once again

Author's Response: I dare you to read until the final chapter. (Whenever that will be.)

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/09/14 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 20

I'm very happy for both of them, and a bit jealous too :)

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/09/14 09:08 am Title: Chapter 19

I sort of feel sorry for Ann, but I know she'll sort her mind out (it might take most of her life, but eventually)

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/09/14 08:06 am Title: Chapter 18

I don't know how but they just keep getting better and better

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/09/14 05:00 am Title: Chapter 17

Oh wow, wow, wow... I'm hot and bothered now! Loved this one especially (15 stars)

Author's Response: where's my 15 stars? I only see 5

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/09/14 04:07 am Title: Chapter 16

Another excellent chapter that has me wishing I was there...

Author's Response: lol

Reviewer: Livvy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/09/14 02:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Eep sorry I thought I did five stars....damm you tablet but like I say I hope the main character stays the way she is....but cool no matter what

Author's Response: You will just have to wait and see.

Author's Response: You will just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: A_Kent Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/08/14 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1

You've been busy and the quality hasn't suffered. Excellent work.

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/08/14 04:09 am Title: Chapter 15

Oh my, I love where this looks like it going to go

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/08/14 03:15 am Title: Chapter 14

Another fantastic chapter

Author's Response: I try my best

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/08/14 01:15 am Title: Chapter 13

Love it all the way

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/14 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 12

Oooh! Love where Ann is going

Author's Response: it gets better

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/14 09:47 am Title: Chapter 11

Excellent, keep up the good work

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/14 09:01 am Title: Chapter 10

Good to see Ann taken away from that creepy coach

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/14 08:16 am Title: Chapter 9

Good but I definitely don't like the coach

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/14 04:39 am Title: Chapter 8

I like it more and more...

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/14 03:40 am Title: Chapter 7

What I would give to have been either of them, but most especially Sandy. Very intriguing and captivating.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/14 02:49 am Title: Chapter 6

If wishes were fishes... How much I wish it was all true... Another excellent chapter

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/06/14 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

Another great chapter.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/06/14 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 4

Fantastic

Author's Response: thanks again

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/06/14 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'd be very happy to be gay with this kid :)

Author's Response: Same here, but I am a girl. It does get me horny in a way.

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/06/14 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

Very very good

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: LoriPantera Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/02/14 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very good story. I know all too well how she feels... from the other side of that fence!

Author's Response: Same here

Reviewer: A_Kent Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/01/14 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like the start, very realistic character and it's pretty well written. Can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: More coming soon

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