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Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/24/14 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hii I really liked this story and I can't wait to read more thanks for sharing you are one of my fav authors

Reviewer: TGLee Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/02/14 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

i highly enjoyed it so far, a few of your sentences need a comma but other than that great job

Author's Response: Hi thanks! I'll give it a once over and see what needs cleaning up. Thanks for being cool! Jim

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