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Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 06/24/14 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well written, I really enjoyed the story, looking forward to the next chapter. Do add more soon.

Reviewer: robertlouis Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/17/14 04:07 am Title: Chapter 1

You write very well. An intriguing opening and I look forward to reading the rest.

Reviewer: Lilly64 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/17/14 01:55 am Title: Chapter 1

An excellent start to the story. A little slow to start the chapter, but it got more interesting as it went on. I feel like the chapter was a little long, it was a bit much to read all at once. I would have split it into 2 chapters. Regardless, a fantastic beginning.

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