Reviews For Sissy by my aunt
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Reviewer: Valentine Signed star Report
Date: 06/09/14 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

USE PARAGRAPHS!! Also capitalize names, use spaces, proofread, proofread a second time, and think about what you write. Does it make sense? A one year old playing baseball? A one year old that is suddenly four? Someone that is that vague about how old their cousin is, and a four year old that would agree to saying they are one?

None of that makes any sense.

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/09/14 11:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Weird story. There was a few typos but it is a good story.

Author's Response: Thank you I'm sorry for the typos but I'm guessing the spell check changes them and your my first nice coment

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