Reviews For In Trouble
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Reviewer: transfansguy Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/20/14 11:39 pm Title: In Trouble

great story. Wish there was more though, but still great.

Reviewer: kandijayne Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/19/14 08:44 pm Title: In Trouble

This is a delicious little story, efficiently written. I realise it's part of an ongoing series, though marked 'complete'. I hope that after the punishment the 'bimbo' part of the spell is removed. After all, if Brett has become in effect her toy, she surely wants him intelligent enough to realise, and remember, what's happened to him...and suffer accordingly? (Heh! Heh! Heh!)

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! This story is in essence an oneshot that occurs outside the main story line. But to answer your question, the bimbo spell is removed after the punishment is dealt, and despite the IQ drop, he is fully aware who he is and will remember everything. I am writing up another oneshot-type story that will also be published on this site.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 05/18/14 01:46 pm Title: In Trouble


Reviewer: RemiTF Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/18/14 10:58 am Title: In Trouble

That was a short and very fun piece of work.

Reviewer: diaperdd Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/17/14 10:37 pm Title: In Trouble

Nice start for sure. Very fun read and looking forward to reading more of his punishment

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