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Reviewer: Dejaht Signed Report
Date: 10/12/18 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 2 - A Mothers Dilemma

Unable to proceed further
The punctuation and grammar is just appalling. Lack of education and laziness are poor combinations. Try putting im instead of I'm on a resume and see what happens.

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 05/05/14 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 2 - A Mothers Dilemma

Can't wait for more, please do not tease. Looking for the next part with antisapation.

Reviewer: Kaastosti Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/05/14 03:59 am Title: Chapter 2 - A Mothers Dilemma

I like it

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 05/04/14 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 2 - A Mothers Dilemma

Very nice,love the twist!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/26/14 11:14 pm Title: A New Day.

Great start,but what happen to the woman he replaced? I like the story so far,I hope you explain more in your next chapter.

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