Date: 06/16/14 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Kind of sad how she tries to never think of being a man, and cannot tell her husband her secret, and that her 'sister' lost her mind, but in a good way at least she won't have to be like her sister and remember being a man. Overall great story, think i cought a typo or two but this story did arouse me. Keep up the good work.^^
Date: 04/21/14 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Overall an amazing story. The only real thing I would change/suggest for the next story, was that Mark lost control too fast and the story became almost too tame once Eve got control.
You are an amazing writer though keep up the good work, I like your style.
Date: 04/16/14 12:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow!!! So much erotic passion, I can almost feel it myself. I am so glad Eve is accepting her role as a heterosexual woman. It makes is so much easier, and more fun to read. Can't wait to see what Mark does to us, and what we do to Mark in the next chapter.