Reviews For The Perfect Woman
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Reviewer: AlexiaRose Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/02/17 01:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Whatever the fuck it was, I wish it had been happening to me.

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/20/14 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 6

Another great chapter.

Reviewer: Daniela_TG Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/09/14 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 6

Surprisingly funny and stimulating story.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/09/14 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 6

Awesome,excellent chapter!

Reviewer: TrevorP9000 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/28/14 01:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Lots of fun to read! Keep it up!

Reviewer: RemiTF Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 04/26/14 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'd also like to suggest editing the earlier chapters with more paragraphs. In general, a paragraph is only 3-5 sentences in length. It's a virtual opportunity to take a breath in-between thoughts, and large blocks of text are difficult to read.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/25/14 09:35 am Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter,loving this story more and more!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 04/13/14 09:13 am Title: Chapter 4

I loving this story with every word you write! Very interesting so far!

Reviewer: Grey Signed Report
Date: 04/12/14 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Too quick to get into the sex. There is little story or anything leading up to a climax...

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 04/10/14 08:34 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow ,awesome two chapters you wrote,loved them both!

Reviewer: Artemesia Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/09/14 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great story. Nice to see these kinds. Thanks and hope to see more! - A

Reviewer: Vuk Signed starstar Report
Date: 04/09/14 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

You really need to use paragraphs. It's very hard to read.

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