Reviews For Gym: Treadmill
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Reviewer: Dwere Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 04/25/12 06:42 pm Title: Gym: Treadmill

Not bad... but maybe not enough?

Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/05/11 01:30 am Title: Gym: Treadmill

Short, simple, and to the point - and well-written as a description of a transformation. It makes you wonder about the larger story. Alex has been targeted, but we don't know why; it's fun to imagine what machinations may be going on here.

Reviewer: Marquise Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/31/11 06:58 am Title: Gym: Treadmill

The medium for the change is quite original, the mental shift is enjoyable, and the results, while not ground breaking, are well executed. An enjoyable read.

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