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Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/28/14 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 16 The 'End' Game

Great story. Write some more.

Author's Response: Thank you for your incouragement Natasa. I'll see what i can do just for you. Sally

Reviewer: magisterb Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/27/14 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mom’s bedroom

A very sexy story, and well written. I think you may be pushing the limit of credibility by having her tits grow from Cs to EEs in such a short time -- or did I misunderstand something"

Author's Response: Dear Magi, Most of this story is 'True', only about 3 or 4 chapters are pure fantasy. The Magic Bra chapter is indeed fantasy (as well as the chapters containing explicet sex) They were on my 'wish list' back whan i was a boy. If you can get by 'my fantasies' I hope you enjoy the 'story'. Sally Marie

Reviewer: Samantha Signed Report
Date: 03/24/14 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mom’s bedroom

Another plus cum/sperm or whatever you want to call it is a salty biter taste and is quite delicious

Author's Response: I like it too dear, Ummm good. Next chapter will be out in about two days

Reviewer: Samantha Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/23/14 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 14: ‘Bob’ meets the ’Girls’

Ok this has been the best story I have read on the site and I skipped tea to read this.
I am a 15 year old sissy myself but this went far off of what I have experienced I cannot for the next chapter

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/21/14 01:47 am Title: Chapter 13: Amelia’s ‘Doll’s’

the story was good until I got to this chapter. It was a little disturbing. otherwise good story.

Author's Response: Thank you for the 'Good Story' review Natasa. But I have to ask, what was it that you found disturbing in chapter 13, I dont want to repeat the problem in subsequent chapters The next chapter (14) is titled : ‘Bob’ meets the ’Girls’ (Karen, Sandy, Louise & Kathy). I think you will find it intertaining (at least I hope so) Sally

Reviewer: Ulysses Signed Report
Date: 03/20/14 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mom’s bedroom

Now this is really backwards haha. Better fix that smiles.

Author's Response: Honey, the titles are labeled wrong but the text is OK. Unfortunately I don't know how to fix it. Sally Marie

Reviewer: Ulysses Signed Report
Date: 03/20/14 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 2: The next step

Was this supposed to be chatper 1?

Author's Response: Yes, I think the system 'fixed it' . Please look again and see

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