Date: 03/27/14 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: Mom’s bedroom
A very sexy story, and well written. I think you may be pushing the limit of credibility by having her tits grow from Cs to EEs in such a short time -- or did I misunderstand something"
Author's Response: Dear Magi, Most of this story is 'True', only about 3 or 4 chapters are pure fantasy. The Magic Bra chapter is indeed fantasy (as well as the chapters containing explicet sex) They were on my 'wish list' back whan i was a boy. If you can get by 'my fantasies' I hope you enjoy the 'story'. Sally Marie
Date: 03/21/14 01:47 am Title: Chapter 13: Amelia’s ‘Doll’s’
the story was good until I got to this chapter. It was a little disturbing. otherwise good story.
Author's Response: Thank you for the 'Good Story' review Natasa. But I have to ask, what was it that you found disturbing in chapter 13, I dont want to repeat the problem in subsequent chapters The next chapter (14) is titled : ‘Bob’ meets the ’Girls’ (Karen, Sandy, Louise & Kathy). I think you will find it intertaining (at least I hope so) Sally