Date: 04/20/14 03:37 am Title: Pride of a Thief
I enjoyed this one, but it definitely warrants a sequel (unless I missed it). I'd even like a... what would you call it? Interquel. Where we hear a little more of her experiences before becoming The Lady Thief's Pride.
Date: 03/21/14 12:00 am Title: Pride of a Thief
I do not particularly like the story, but i like how you set how the story will move forward so i do not uhhh misuse my time :) i appreciate that, and will therefore most likely read your future stories instead of my usual just avoiding stories by a author i disliked one story of
Author's Response: Aw dang. Well, beauty is in the eye of the beholder and all that jazz. Thanks for your consideration :3
Date: 03/19/14 09:16 pm Title: Pride of a Thief
Speeding pace? That was still quite slow compared to some of my stories...
Author's Response: It's all relative. I'm normally used to writing with a slower pace and a load of details about everything, so I was deathly afraid about how this would have turned out. It's like if we were all living by land mines and learning how to survive. We might live in big land mines or small ones, but the most dangerous place to step in is unfamiliarity. You can bob and weave through your own territory like all the traps were marked by neon signs, but you got nothing when moving to new places.
Date: 03/19/14 09:02 pm Title: Pride of a Thief
Very nicely written, and I don't think the pace was too for fast, more or less just right. Loved the ending aswell, thanks for a great story!
Author's Response: Oh fantastic! You have no idea how worried I was about that! Glad you liked it! :)