Date: 03/30/14 01:53 am Title: Chapter 3: A City's Song
Amity is taking the whole thing pretty well and seems capable of adapting well considering the new body so far.
I'm curious about gender identity. Normally that changes during a magical or sci-fi change, but a brain transplant is quite different. I wonder if magic was involved or if it's going to be an issue later on. Given the reaction, maybe Amity is very adaptable in that regard.
Date: 03/24/14 02:27 am Title: Chapter 2: Pick-me-up
I had a feeling that she was a siren. Seems like I'm correct. :D
Cimi seems so casual about some things. "Oh, hey, that body of yours? Belonged to a girl who quite possibly is my daughter. No worries."
I'm guessing Troice's new body is her daughter because of the similarities between them. Interesting.
Author's Response: Good call on the Siren, means you read about Pride :), and close on the other one, definitely family
Date: 03/24/14 01:55 am Title: Chapter 1: The Knight Fall
i like where this is going i just have one question is all three of your story's in the same universe if so will we see people from them in each story or not just wondering
Author's Response: Yep, Vanasia is on one world. However, this story is on another continent (and underwater), so no meetings anytime soon.
Date: 03/17/14 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Knight Fall
good start hope to see where you go with this i hope he will be able to kill the assassins that got him
Author's Response: All depends. I wonder if Troice will be heading back up to the surface anytime soon...
Date: 03/17/14 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Knight Fall
I was thinking at first that the writing of the attack on Troice seemed a bit too detached, but then as I read on it made a lot more sense. He seems like the kind of person who's seen a lot, so much so that it takes a lot to faze him, and the narration reflects that.
It'll be interesting to see how this one pans out.
Author's Response: Mmhm, I'm trying to accurately depict the traits of an old man. I think it'll be an interesting exercise, to see how his experience will influence his new life.
Date: 03/17/14 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Knight Fall
A nice start! Can't say much about it since it was so short, but was interesting enough to make me want to read the next chapter, that's for sure :)
Author's Response: Awesome! I hope you continue to enjoy this lighthearted storyline!