Date: 03/16/14 09:55 pm Title: The only chapter
Neat little fic. The only flaw in it is that we the readers can already tell that it's a dude narrating just from the story tags right above the text.
Author's Response: You should be able to tell by reading it too. I wasn't trying to hide that it was a guy.
Date: 03/08/14 08:18 am Title: The only chapter
I like it so far. Straight and to the point. I'd just say describe the actual changes more. You sort of gloss over them too much
Now to wait three months for the next chapter...
Author's Response: There is no next chapter, nor will there be.