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Reviewer: Lucy Perkins Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/26/14 02:07 pm Title: The only chapter

This story made me laugh! Clever and entertaining without being salacious! Love it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and took it for what it is.

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/16/14 09:55 pm Title: The only chapter

Neat little fic. The only flaw in it is that we the readers can already tell that it's a dude narrating just from the story tags right above the text.

Author's Response: You should be able to tell by reading it too. I wasn't trying to hide that it was a guy.

Reviewer: Gillian1968 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/11/14 09:37 pm Title: The only chapter

Short but fun!
An ingenious idea.

Author's Response: And way too much late night TV.

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 03/08/14 07:50 pm Title: The only chapter

This is really a great story hummer included.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/08/14 11:14 am Title: The only chapter

I very cute and pleasant story,but a little short.

Author's Response: I wrote it very quickly late at night after seeing yet another Nutrisystem commercial.

Reviewer: blackbear Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/08/14 08:18 am Title: The only chapter

I like it so far. Straight and to the point. I'd just say describe the actual changes more. You sort of gloss over them too much

Now to wait three months for the next chapter...

Author's Response: There is no next chapter, nor will there be.

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