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Reviewer: Motojoel Signed Report
Date: 03/08/14 02:59 am Title: Prologe

Yer i know im getting there i mostly write poems and havnt written a story in a long time but the chapters will get longer now that its all fiction from here on in.

Reviewer: Aki_Breeze Signed starstar Report
Date: 03/08/14 02:34 am Title: Prologe

You really need to use more punctuation. Periods, commas, etc... Also, I would recommend trying to make sure your chapters are at LEAST 1200 words in length, they are far too short. Don't give up, but I would recommend looking at some of the more popular stores on this site for guidance.

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