Date: 03/10/14 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 3: Familial Pride
Andrew has had this coming for a very long time. Considering, he's had people killed and ruined so many people's lives he has a lot of karma in the negative column.
Author's Response: Ah, but will the Balancer's karma ever be balanced out in a lifetime? He has quite a bit of debt to pay.
Date: 03/10/14 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 3: Familial Pride
I love magic. :D
Lawrence's plight gets no sympathy from me. It is kind of funny though.
Author's Response: Mmhm, magic is the best ^_^. Oh yes, this is a story with the least sympathetic character I can formulate. Now I just have to see if I can forge it into a good tale!
Date: 03/10/14 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 3: Familial Pride
Hah! An illusionist with a grandiose mastermind complex. I love it! And for all his talk of being prepared, a fairly careless one at that! This will make for some great fun.
I'm not a big fan of the initial monologue spilling so much info, though. Some of those details would have been so much fun to figure out through the story. But villains gotta monologue, I suppose! It's the rules. Anyway, I love the premise, and I'm very interested to see where it goes.
Also, I will pay to learn the rune configuration for manbearpig.
Author's Response: Yeah, that introduction chapter was a new experience for me. I'm kinda wondering how it will work out for the finished product. The story's all planned out, and it looks good on paper. Let's see how it looks under the watchful eyes of the audience!
Date: 03/10/14 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: Balancer's Hello
*squeals* I love this story so far. I'm very curious to see where this goes - I sense a sibling confrontation if the brother investigates just how Andrew got transformed too closely ;)
I quite liked the transformation, too. It's a good thing he smeared the runes just right to spell 'female' instead of 'manbearpig'
Author's Response: A man with bearpig powers would also be very interesting, I think. No confrontation though, not yet anyway ;D