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Reviewer: LoveFox Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/23/20 05:53 pm Title: How it all started

Would love to see this continued.

Reviewer: Katherine24 Signed Report
Date: 06/09/14 08:00 pm Title: How it all started

Writ more please

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 03/04/14 05:19 pm Title: How it all started

Its a good start. Lots of typos. Also try to use a word proccesor that has spell check. Otherwise good story.

Reviewer: Silver wings Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 03/04/14 04:15 am Title: How it all started

the story has a good start but needs a little extra unph. Trying something completely out of the blue should give it the kick it needs. all and all its fairly decent

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