Reviews For Back from College
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Reviewer: kandijayne Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/09/14 05:10 pm Title: Back from College

This was quite a well-written story with overall an upbeat feeling, and a positive ending. I thought the picture of the younger sister was sweet, and the (fairly brief) switch to her point of view actually worked. Wasn't sure about the father having a heart attack on meeting his new daughter for the first time; it semed almost like a device to get him out of the way for the reunion. But overall - well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: HER Signed Report
Date: 03/19/14 01:55 pm Title: Back from College

Nice!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 03/02/14 07:17 am Title: Back from College

Cute,interesting look at a home coming.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/01/14 12:02 pm Title: Back from College

Sweet tale; it is a little disjointed at times. I'm surprised so many people were in the dark.

Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry for any confusion, though.

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