Date: 04/09/14 05:10 pm Title: Back from College
This was quite a well-written story with overall an upbeat feeling, and a positive ending. I thought the picture of the younger sister was sweet, and the (fairly brief) switch to her point of view actually worked. Wasn't sure about the father having a heart attack on meeting his new daughter for the first time; it semed almost like a device to get him out of the way for the reunion. But overall - well done.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!