Date: 04/02/17 12:40 pm Title: Revenge of the sister
Mate great story! I loved the Latin spells you included. In one of my stories I did a similar thing except I tried really hard to make the translation make sense. I wasn't very good at it :,) Anyway keep up the good writing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 08/10/14 02:15 am Title: Revenge of the sister
Please continue this!!!
I'm living how everything flows and feels great..
Can't wait to see a new chapter, please?
Author's Response: New chapter? Never expected that! I was considering a sequel to this at some point in the future, but I don't know. Maybe when I have a bit of time.
Date: 03/24/14 01:04 pm Title: Revenge of the sister
Where did you come up with the latin words, or did you make them up? I always wondered if magic spells derived from Latin or Greek or some other ancient language.
Author's Response: You can go ahead and thank an online english to latin translator for those.
Date: 02/15/14 05:59 am Title: Revenge of the sister
That was different, and in this genre different is most definitely welcome. Add in that it's well written and plotted out adds to the goodness. My one nitpick.... a footnote translation for the Latin. It's been decades since High School for me, and I sucked at Latin anyhow. 9/10 :-)
Author's Response: I would have, but forgot what I typed. I used a translator, and couldn't remember. It was basically a translation of what was about to happen, if you didn't figure that out. And thanks!
Date: 02/14/14 04:10 pm Title: Revenge of the sister
i really enjoyed that. like other reviewer said make more magic stories seeing you are good at them.
Author's Response: Thanks! As I said, I'll look a bit more into it. No guarantees though, I have writer's block something awful.