Date: 07/29/15 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am a bit late coming to this story. I usually avoid stories that say they will be dark, but I came back to it anyway. That being said, at least as it stands right now (and presumably this is all it will be?), it isn't that dark, just kind of frustrating for the protagonist.
Anyway, really great! Do not regret reading it at all. Wish it had kept going (as long as it avoided topics like death and torture or anything very seriously dark).
Date: 05/15/14 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well written and definitely engaging, but talk about depressing. This kid finds nothing at all even remotely tolerable about what he's morphed into. But with breasts that ridiculously large who could blame him? And God his dad is such a pig. It's his kid, and he behaves as if any moment he's going to jump Jamie's bones. This story is different from the usual TG story, no question. This kid does not like the transformation one bit. One gets the impression that for him nothing good will ever come of it. God knows he could probably milk it, a modeling career, the talk-show circuit, mass media celebrity status. He could have a lot of fun with it and get rich to boot. Am curious to see where this leads.
Date: 03/16/14 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Neat little story. What I really enjoy is how you describe the claustrophobia and discrimination that James/Jamie is feeling in his small little town. The doctor at the beginning of the fic was right- I wouldn't want to live in a place like that either.