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Reviewer: Butterfly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/14/15 02:21 am Title: Chapter 1

I wouldn't scream,
I'd probably giggle.

Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/29/13 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1

I like it!

Reviewer: Marquise Signed starstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 05/31/11 06:02 am Title: Chapter 1

A most amusing one off. I usually dislike stories that result in the character becoming a previously established character or celebrity, but the light hearted tone and brevity of narration make it a non issue. One point of improvement would be to better clarify the page breaks, but for a tale that lasts all of three hundred and half words that beef is negligible

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