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Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed Report
Date: 06/18/14 12:28 am Title: Back

Sorry I didnt like it. But it doesnt mean you should stop writing.

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed star Report
Date: 06/18/14 12:25 am Title: Change

Boring

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed star Report
Date: 06/18/14 12:23 am Title: Sadness

not all girls starve themselves. it is not right to even mention it in a story.

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstar Report
Date: 06/18/14 12:16 am Title: School

youre going to fast in the story. you should slow down and tell more of it.

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed Report
Date: 06/18/14 12:11 am Title: Outside

What do I say...

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed Report
Date: 06/18/14 12:08 am Title: How

too fast. But good story

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/18/14 12:00 am Title: Wish

lol. a bit to fast for the chapter but funny

Reviewer: diaperdd Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/18/14 01:37 pm Title: Back

i liked the story espicially the little twist near the end. and please write more stories i know i would read them. thanks

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed Report
Date: 01/17/14 07:36 pm Title: Wish

A woman can't be Miss USA if she's married. That's against the rules. There were a lot of typos in the last posting. Slow down and check your stories closely before posting.

Reviewer: kutacross Signed Report
Date: 01/15/14 02:44 am Title: Wish

Seems a tad bit rushed but its pretty good

Reviewer: diaperdd Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/15/14 01:14 am Title: Change

Great twist and great chapter.

Reviewer: Dayna Signed Report
Date: 01/14/14 01:59 pm Title: How

Holy no paragraphs Batman!!!

Put some effort into formatting!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/14/14 10:33 am Title: Change

Interesting twist!

Reviewer: diaperdd Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/11/14 01:43 pm Title: Sadness

Cute chapter. good to see she stilltrust males after her rape

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/11/14 11:21 am Title: Sadness

Cute,very cute.

Reviewer: Ulysses Signed Report
Date: 01/11/14 08:50 am Title: Sadness

Interesting story.
Myself, I'm writing something similar, but it's more realistic and very exciting at the same time. Check it out, as it is continuously being worked on.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/10/14 10:05 pm Title: School

Interesting plot ! Hope there's a happier side!

Reviewer: diaperdd Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/10/14 07:41 pm Title: School

Ouch poor girl. great chapter

Reviewer: rohitgulia Signed Report
Date: 01/10/14 09:17 am Title: School

The seems flawless good writing skills that you are showing

Reviewer: darwen98 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/10/14 01:05 am Title: Outside

loving it a lot

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/09/14 09:50 pm Title: Outside

Cute!

Reviewer: Princess_Panty_boy 92646 Signed Report
Date: 01/09/14 02:49 am Title: How

Fun story just wish it was longer. Thanks for sharing Hun.

Hugs
Princess pantyboy

Reviewer: diaperdd Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/09/14 12:30 am Title: How

great chapter. getting good now

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/09/14 12:20 am Title: How

Nice second chapter.

Reviewer: ACDC Metal Fan Signed Report
Date: 01/08/14 09:36 pm Title: How

Dude you have a nice story coming up. But try to make it more longer, try to at least pass two thousand words per chapter. Also modify the structure of your chapter, the first one had a good structure, why wouldn't this one be the same?

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/08/14 02:09 am Title: Wish

Nice start!

Reviewer: diaperdd Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/07/14 06:51 pm Title: Wish

nice start. hope you continue cause this could be fun

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