Reviews For War of the sexes
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Reviewer: ACDC Metal Fan Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/08/14 08:39 pm Title: Truth behind the war

You have a nice story, gave a new path for this sort of stories, which I hope the main character takes. You had some grammar mistakes like guinea pig. And I recommend you one thing, if you want more people to review your stories, try to review other person's stories too.

Author's Response: Ok, thanks for the feedback :)

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