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Reviewer: Lost Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/13/19 05:38 pm Title: Second Period

Really enjoying the story - looking forward to seeing where it ends up going!

Reviewer: LillyLove Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/09/18 08:56 pm Title: Zero Period

Oooh this is a slow burn. I like it though. I love the subtle name changes, can't wait for the final juicy reveal. No rush though. Will his interest in compsci stay? Who knows. Keep writing please!

Critically, it's all completely legible, but there hasn't been much of a plot. It's more been simply subtle transformations and intrigue. That's not necessarily bad, I still enjoyt this a lot. That's why I gave it 4 stars. Again, please keep writing.

Reviewer: Elly Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/09/18 03:12 pm Title: Second Period

Definitly drew me in, pretty confusing why these changes are happening but its interesting so far.

Reviewer: thebimboguy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/06/18 05:47 pm Title: Zero Period

I love how this is starting! I really hope you continue it this time around, you're doing great

Reviewer: Lost Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/18 09:39 pm Title: First Period

Looking forward to the next part!

Reviewer: daelon Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/31/18 02:22 pm Title: Zero Period

This is a great start, and I'm excited to see where it goes.

Reviewer: happyboy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/04/14 10:40 pm Title: A Break and a Talk

Waiting with interest for the next chapters hoping they come up to this standard I enjoyed this story well written

Reviewer: Lost Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/01/14 05:02 am Title: Zero Period

I really liked how this looked to be heading, it's disappointing that it wasn't continued.

Reviewer: Krv1987 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/08/14 08:57 am Title: Zero Period

Intresting keep it up

Reviewer: stucky Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/05/14 08:26 am Title: Zero Period

I love the way this is going, slow changes that the main character is unaware of. I hope clothing is also part of the transformation. Nice writing style, please continue.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 01/04/14 07:39 pm Title: Zero Period

Hope the next chapter is better.

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