Date: 11/09/18 08:56 pm Title: Zero Period
Oooh this is a slow burn. I like it though. I love the subtle name changes, can't wait for the final juicy reveal. No rush though. Will his interest in compsci stay? Who knows. Keep writing please!
Critically, it's all completely legible, but there hasn't been much of a plot. It's more been simply subtle transformations and intrigue. That's not necessarily bad, I still enjoyt this a lot. That's why I gave it 4 stars. Again, please keep writing.