Date: 08/30/16 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Twist of Fate
I hadn't read any of this story before last night, but now have read the entire thing. It's a nice bit of arousing material, that's for sure. I can see why it's so popular. You describe the numerous sex acts with great detail, though at times with some unfortunate and squick-inducing language. This doesn't detract too much from the fun though.
I am interested to see how Reilly comes out the other side of the recent events. Now that she can think straight again, will she revert to a more normal existence, or is she now too in love with the pleasures of her body to think about changing back? I'm also quite amused that this story feature's a character's death. There seems to be a trend in long sex-focused stories where one character dies for some reason.
Anyway, over all, good work!
Date: 01/26/16 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Decisions
I'm loving this story, and I can't wait to see where it's going.
I'm sure when you post the next chapters it's going to be great, now that Riley has now filled her wish.
Wonder what would happen if anyone sees that video, specially if it's Kevin, a scene between them would be something, she needs to ride his dick...
Date: 03/12/15 01:59 am Title: Chapter 14 - A Star is Born
A great chapter but you lose points for being so late on the updates. Would have been 5/5 but months without updates takes it toll
Author's Response: Oh boo! ;) Sorry I've been late in updating, real life caught up with me. But doncha think it was worth the wait? <3
Date: 11/01/14 03:17 am Title: Chapter 13 - Critical Conditions
I absolutely love this story! It's just so great how into it the characters get. I love how everyone is quickly put into a funny/super hot predicament, and they never fail to just enjoy themselves. I feel like this is one of the few stories that really takes advantage of being fantasy, and it's just so fun to read.
I'd love for a Reilly, (current) Cat, and Jared 3-some, and I could imagine him being into it. Reilly, Cat, and Kevin would be crazy good too, but maybe with original Cat. Also, could you continue to describe Reilly's appearance and outfits? You've been so descriptive so far, and I always enjoy it.
In any case, thanks for continuing to write! I'm sure where ever you decide to take it, it'll be great!
Date: 08/23/14 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Coffee and Consequences
I don't always like wishing/genie stories. They're so overused and people let the stories go too quickly.
That said, holy mother of... why didn't I know of this story before now? I mean, seriously. I... I'm... uh... speechless.
Author's Response: Well thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/18/14 03:00 am Title: Chapter 9 - So... That's what it's like.
This is really hot, and pretty funny too. I hope you keep the story going, I'd love to find out how these 3 get out of such a silly and sexy predicament, hopefully with some more mischief along the way.
Author's Response: I can't stop now, I have been rolling ideas in my head for months now... stay tuned
Date: 06/21/14 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 9 - So... That's what it's like.
Amazing chapter. Can't wait for more. Hate to sound like a broken record but I hope it's not as much of a wait for the next one. Are we ever going to see the genie guy again? Reilly is really liking her new role. If the genie does come back in any way I would like to see a little more resistance with Reilly maybe leave the compulsions but bring back the realization she was a guy, then she has to choose and fight her new porn-star like life. Or maybe just when she actually is with a guy (instead of a girl with a dick) she might fight it a bit more?
Author's Response: Very good food for thought, you're review has shaped the flow of the story. There will be some more crazy twists before all is said and done :)
Date: 06/06/14 01:05 am Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Decisions
More! We waited pretty much a week and only got a blowjob scene :( The story is amazing and I don't want it to burn out too fast but I expected more, I hope more comes and soon.
Also I think it's the weirdest thing that a person who comes to this site and reads dirty transgender/transformation stories and has the name TransfanGuy can actually freak out over a relatively minor reference to Jesus. I thought someone couldn't be that backwards, it must have been a joke overreaction but then he apologized? Dude find a sturdier pedestal to rage from.
Date: 05/27/14 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cat's Cradle
I have a feeling men will think she is a... (I hate to say this word because people call me it and it annoys me) tranny. I hope Cat doesn't have that problem.
Author's Response: Don't worry - I wasn't planning on going there, I try to be sensitive to everyone and I know people take issue with that epithet. Thanks for all the feedback!