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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/06/20 01:57 pm Title: Surprise of my life

I love happy endings. Great finish to the story.

Reviewer: MrSimple Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/05/18 04:18 pm Title: Surprise of my life

This made me smile. :)

Kinda a bummer that the dad wants to have his son back, but what can he do? Actually, I might find that out in the final installment. >.>

Reviewer: kandijayne Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/05/14 09:00 am Title: Surprise of my life

Well, this was a surprise. Firstly, kudos for doing a sequel to Hikaro's story and making a good job of it.. But a 'sort of' Magical Sex Change? I wasn't sure at first. If only all bullied, transgender children could do this! But this got better as it went along, and the ending was just right (i.e. slushily romantic :) ) I was convinced! Tenses are a bit wobbly at the beginning, but apart from that, good work. I've given it four stars, but it's really four and a half..

Author's Response: Thank you! It was quite fun to do, really.

Reviewer: I_Think Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/28/13 01:23 am Title: Surprise of my life

For some reason I'm always hesitant to read a work that directly builds on another author's work. You've helped me become just that much more comfortable with the idea. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Hikaro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/26/13 02:33 pm Title: Surprise of my life

Holy crap, you went and did it. I'm flattered and surprised. It was nice to see things from Karen's point of view as she revealed to Brandon (oh my God, he had a name?!)... well, absolutely nothing, really. Despite knowing that she changed herself, she doesn't know how she did it. Very creative way of explaining something that had no explanation when I thought it up. I should do this more often, write a short story and task somebody else with writing the sequel. It's great to see how somebody else uses characters I made up. I may have made 'em, but YOU made 'em better. Thank you very much for writing this.

Author's Response: You're very welcome, and it was a nice change from having writer's block on one of my other stories. It was fun to write, and I hope to see that you pursue that idea!

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