Reviews For The reunion
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Reviewer: A_Kent Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/14 11:10 am Title: The reunion

This is a nice little story. I can see that you've always had a talent for dialogue, and it's cool seeing how you've improved with descriptions since you wrote this. Very nice.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, dialogue always was my strong suit. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: kandijayne Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/11/14 09:34 am Title: The reunion

Nice story, with an upbeat ending - I imagine Bobbi and Steven getting it together in other ways than just having dinner! I would have liked Bobbi to have strung some of the guests along a bit more before revealing who she was - getting a bit of her own back for the bullying treatment Bobby had received. But that's just my personal preference. This story is a success just as it is.

Author's Response: I thought about doing that, but I also wanted to make a shorter story than I usually did, and that was the product. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/05/13 01:40 pm Title: The reunion

Nice vignette. Hope she gets over all the bitterness.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: diaperdd Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/04/13 09:10 am Title: The reunion

Have to say i really enjoyed reading this story. love to see such a happy ending for her. thanks

Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for leaving a review too!

Reviewer: greenhawk Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/04/13 08:42 am Title: The reunion

Not remarkable for long time, but certainly a good story. Worth a read, liked it.


Author's Response: Thanks, it kept me from writing any of my other stories, so I wrote it up and posted it. Glad you liked it!

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