Date: 08/19/14 11:10 am Title: The reunion
This is a nice little story. I can see that you've always had a talent for dialogue, and it's cool seeing how you've improved with descriptions since you wrote this. Very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, dialogue always was my strong suit. Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/11/14 09:34 am Title: The reunion
Nice story, with an upbeat ending - I imagine Bobbi and Steven getting it together in other ways than just having dinner! I would have liked Bobbi to have strung some of the guests along a bit more before revealing who she was - getting a bit of her own back for the bullying treatment Bobby had received. But that's just my personal preference. This story is a success just as it is.
Author's Response: I thought about doing that, but I also wanted to make a shorter story than I usually did, and that was the product. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!