Reviews For The Story of Leona
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Reviewer: Hayley Holly Grace Sissy Boy Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/12 11:36 am Title: Volume 1 - Chapter 4: Leon, Meet Leona

I really enjoyed this . Look forward to more

Reviewer: Hayley Holly Grace Sissy Boy Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/12 11:30 am Title: Volume 1 - Chapter 3: The Meeting with Dr. Longsten

Another interesting chapter. Love it to bits

Reviewer: Hayley Holly Grace Sissy Boy Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/12 11:28 am Title: Volume 1 - Chapter 2: Let It Begin

Again like the way you have wriiten this. Some people would think not a lot has happened in tow chapters, But a lot has happened. Short chapters make the reader more interested. I hate books that are just a maas of writing. You have a good thing going here.

Reviewer: Hayley Holly Grace Sissy Boy Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/12 11:23 am Title: Volume 1 - Chapter 1: Leon

Love the idea for this story and the way you keep the reader in suspense for the next chapter. Also its short and sweet which I think is a good thing.

Reviewer: missanonymusgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/06/12 10:36 pm Title: Volume 1 - Chapter 4: Leon, Meet Leona

Awwww I have really enjoyed reading this. Please add more!

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