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Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/15/14 12:27 am Title: Chapter 1

That was a really good story. I enjoyed it really much.

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/30/14 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very good story. I wish I could be the new Tess.

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 11/14/13 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

The merging of the hypnotised personality... The part that really confuses me though, is his personality is Tess from when she new his father when i guess he was innocent i suppose. How would the kidnappers kinda know that personality, or i mean your right it could still be a fake personality implemented, either way it still got the kidnappers what they wanted. i honestly think they should have died or something similar happens to them what happened to her.

Author's Response: Hmmm. Not quite sure what you're getting at... If you're thinking that the kidnappers are somehow imposing the Tess personality on Thomas, my thought was that they were just telling him "You are now Tess" and he built the personality from within based on his extensive knowledge of her, which would have come largely from what he had heard about her from his father and others. Keep in mind, when he's in Tess mode, he's still actually Thomas acting (unconsciously) like the way he believe the real Tess would act. By the way, this story is better read via the PDF file on my website, because the captioned pictures are an integral part of the story. I did include the text of the captions in the story that appears here, but with the speakers not identified it's a bit harder to follow. Amanda

Reviewer: Person42 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/14/13 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting... not what I expected at all!

Author's Response: I'll take that as a compliment. TG fiction is very seldom surprising these days... :-)

Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 11/13/13 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ouch, he let his own son get turned into a woman, and then what she just lost her mind? she knows she was still thomas but hates his own father... Cant say i blame him i guess

Author's Response: Not so much "lost her mind". What I was going for was a blending of the original Thomas personality with the personality he assumed when he was hypnotized into believing he was Tess. This is a tricky effect to capture, so no big surprise if it doesn't come through for some people...

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