Date: 12/01/13 02:44 am Title: Chapter 1
While this hit several of my favorite aspects of TG stories, I think what I really liked about it was that it was very well written and an enjoyable read. If I had any criticism it would be the variations in tone and purpose between chapters, but I can understand how a story can take twists and turns that even the author may not anticipate. Lycandope, I will be sure to read happily any future submissions here or elsewhere!
Author's Response: Those variations in tone are also due to the story taking over a year to write with months inbetween some chapters and a little (hopefully) growth in writing ability as well. May I ask - what aspects do you enjoy in TG stories?
Date: 11/16/13 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this story a lot. I want to thank you for writing this, Lycandope. I wish we all had the ability to accept who we are, and love others for who they are.
Author's Response: Thank you! Do you think the message came across well with the series as a whole but especially with the last chapter? Layers is kind of a rushed project so I typically write it all in one go and then edit the chapter in one pass and post it. So, I kind of rushed through the last chapter, I feel like.
Date: 11/16/13 03:31 am Title: Chapter 10b
Woof! Very, very intense. Kept things moving along, incredible attention to detail, even in the middle of a fight or sex scene. Thank you. Hoping you will write more.
Author's Response: Well, I have Jenny up but that's quite a different story. I have an idea for another TG story down the road but I have quite a few other projects to finish before that. Typically I'm more TF than TG.
Date: 11/09/13 06:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm not normally into race-shifting or were's - but this story has a lot more going for it than that... The strange changings of the main character are interesting - and his / her personality changing is quite interesting too, going from a beta to an alpha wolf type personality. The first several chapters are mainly erotica - but they're really good and evocative. It was an entertaining read - but I think I would have enjoyed it more if we'd seen more story outside the bedroom before chapter 9. The change in Elaine and Steven was interesting too - and fits with some of the pop culture legends about weres, which was kinda cool. Still, it was great to read - I still have to read chapter 9 onward, but I'm looking forward to it. very Enjoyable
Author's Response: Hello! I hope you enjoyed chapter 9 even if I feel like that chapter is kind of a setup/filler for the last chapter. And, thank you for the compliments :) I have to say, the story started off as a simple small erotic piece with the fursuit based on a daydream I had. And then people wanted more so I added a bit and then added a bit - so that's why it reads like a p*** with a story tacked on. Although, I'm hoping the explanations from chapter 8 kind of make the story make a logical sense? I had a hard time figuring out how to make it make sense so I asked for ideas and I had a user (several months back) give me a really good seed of an idea to make it work. Thank you for trying it even though weres are not your thing!
Date: 11/08/13 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
You have some decent writing skills. It's simply written in a language that hooks up. You could write anything and it would get lots of readers
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I only have one other TG story here but I have other kinds on my website if you're interested. Do you think the simple writing style is a liability at all? I write first person stories differently than I do third person stuff. First person tends to come out way more stream-of-conscious.
Date: 11/08/13 02:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Ok , u got me hooked, I'm loving this story so far!
Author's Response: Thanks! Are there any particular parts you enjoy? TG is not my normal medium. Also, do you still enjoy the later chapters even though there is no tg transformations happening?