Date: 01/28/16 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
Eek! Aunt Flo has come to visit! (Giggles). I'm guessing Jenna's not going to be hassling Jackie again anytime soon! Nice story arc Oak! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: I'm enjoying your chapter-by-chapter commentary. I hope you enjoy the last story as well!
Date: 12/01/15 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
So, I found this recently and I have to say I enjoyed it greatly. Sad thing is, as far as I can tell, it has been 2 years since this was completed and I see no "Part 3" to Jackie's story... :( And if reviews don't cause a notification to be sent to the author, I worry this review won't even get noticed... :( Oh well. Keep doing what you are doing, Oak. You are good at it.
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouragement. As a matter of fact I did not see a message about this review. I recently finished the rough draft of the final installment in this series. If you would like to read it I can send you a copy by email at firstname.lastname@example.org. I won't be publishing the entire story here. I plan to bundle up these stories and put them on Amazon for Kindle later this year.
Date: 03/06/15 06:28 am Title: Chapter 1
The story is truly amazing.....and the hesitant feelings that Jackie expressesas she is moving towards womanhood almost mirror my own as a transitioning transwoman. I think that you expertly captured that awkward phase of mot fully understanding yourself anymore.
I am so very excited for the next part of the story.
Thank you for this wonderful writing.
Author's Response: I'm floored by your kind words! I have not experienced such a transition myself. My starting point was adolescent angst (which I do remember well) and imagined how much harder it would be for her in this situation. I hope the rest of the story lived up to the promise you saw in the first chapter. I also hope that your transition has a happy ending!
Date: 11/23/13 07:32 am Title: Chapter 8
Completed story? Christ I hope not. It ends rather abruptly and without the 'climax' or 'resolution' a story should have....
Author's Response: There will be another installment. I added the comment about the next story in this series in the main body of the text so it will be more visible. Likewise for reference to the prologue story. I hope you will enjoy it.
Date: 11/23/13 03:28 am Title: Chapter 1
A little slow at first but when i understood it i was really into it. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Perhaps you missed the first part "X Chromosome Therapy - Resurrection"? I added reference to this in the story text itself because so many people missed it in the chapter notes.
Date: 11/22/13 01:58 am Title: Chapter 8
Great story I was a bit co fused at first but great so far
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sorry you found it confusing. Did you read "Resurrection" first? It would be confusing without that portion. I guess I should have grouped these as a series.
Date: 11/09/13 05:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this story - it reminds me of a sweet modern fairy tale. Jackie is a nice young person, who I personally wanted to end up happy. His family seem so loving and supporting - which is a nice change from some stories where a previously loving family goes all hateful. I know it may not be the most common - but it made for nice, pleasant reading and I look forward to reading more!
Its not an adventure story or action story - its more of a 'slice of life' story with a sweet sentimental edge to it. Very nice and refreshing!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind and thoughtful words! I decided that since this started as a near-death experience, the natural response for a family that cares would be to count their blessings rather than to turn against the protaganist. I've read a few too many of the kinds of stories that you describe. Admittedly, my other stories are not sentimental!
Date: 11/07/13 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
one problem with this part. you never told us when his penis finaly went away and he actualy became a girl down there even though the final touches are not in place yet.
Author's Response: I've tried to avoid making this story sexual, at least so far. I wanted to do something PG for a change.