Date: 01/21/16 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Too quick-paced. You won't really be able to get SRS or hormones that quickly. I think that it was an interesting read but could have been much longer to avoid the time compression.
Author's Response: Whoa, this story? Honestly, it's been so long I'd have to look at it again. I mean, I don't doubt that you're telling the truth, but it's been two years. I like to think I've improved since then, and realistic change was never my strongest suit. Nice to hear your opinion, though! Might have to reread this one...
Date: 01/13/14 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story, although, I would like to see an extension or sequel to it. The end is almost a cliff-hanger! On a single thread!
Author's Response: I'll consider it, but no promises. If I do make one it will take a while, I have things going on.
Date: 10/29/13 06:30 am Title: Chapter 1
News of the bet had spread all over....so how is Toni supposed to win of everyone know (s)he's really Tony?
Author's Response: There were many new students, and nobody really thought Tony would make a passable girl, just a guy cross dressing. So they just thought Toni was a new student. Thanks for reviewing, though!
Date: 10/28/13 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Too much time compression. Not very realistic. I don't think the author really understands what goes on.
Author's Response: Sorry, I wrote it a while ago and didn't really take much time editing it. I think this was also the one I rushed to finish because it was impeding other things in my life. Sorry.