Date: 09/24/13 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: Through the looking glass
Its a good story. But you had a few errors in spelling and in sentencing. Also heah MISSISSIPPI!!
Author's Response: I know about the errors.Those are mainly for accent flavor on the characters part. The sentence errors however, aren't I usually edit and check the work 2-3 times before I even consider posting it, so a quiet email on such thhings is always appreciated.