Reviews For My new girlfriend
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Reviewer: a1993 Signed Report
Date: 03/09/14 10:17 am Title: My life as it is

i honestly dont mind both endings, but then again im kinda a sucker for happy ones so i do prefer this one

Author's Response: Isn't everybody?

Reviewer: Liam Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/13/13 11:08 am Title: My life as it is

Other ending, I want read the other ending. I am intrigued to find out what would have been. Because, what had been, was awesome.

Author's Response: Hmm, alright. I'll write that down someplace and try and get it out soon!

Reviewer: greenhawk Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 09/12/13 03:48 pm Title: My life as it is

I liked the story, with Well-written lines, the interesting idea of partial resist and the part with the magnum made this story interesting and fun to read.
I also liked Joanne tricks such as "accident" with the throat part and the subliminal messages in the music, not bad.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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