Date: 10/13/13 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
How old did you say you were? Wow, you sure let it all hang out. The only caveat is the real world. How many guys would not be so agreeable to finding out your character's true genitalia status. Just ask that TG contributor, Dauphin of "I am Nobody," According to him, you can be severely beaten up just for wearing tights underneath your jeans. There are still a lot of old-school types out there who would sooner see all of us at TG Storytime (even me) tortured and killed rather than accept our right to exist in their universe. As for me, I loved the story.
Date: 09/09/13 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not bad, judging by your other story, it's like you are actully two other pepole or something, this time you are using commas well, pressing "enter" when requied and making hardly miswriting anything, if there are any spelling mistakes at all.
Author's Response: no i am the same person i hust had this one for a while on my computer and actually took my time and im glad you like it