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Reviewer: Jim Ruggeri Signed starstar Report
Date: 11/08/14 12:31 am Title: Chapter 1 the end starts here

This could have done with some reading and rereading. Crafting a story takes a little effort, and I can tell from the ideas you've got it in you!

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed Report
Date: 06/17/14 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 the end starts here

you need to continue and make your chapters a little longer.

Reviewer: TGLee Signed star Report
Date: 08/21/13 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1 the end starts here

its a little too short for a first post, it provides very little to your plot development and needs some editing, even spell check would improve this.

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